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Posted 28 May 2008 - 05:13 PM

The Word "Demise"
By Brad D.J Law

Fuck you fuck me,
Fuck this reality,
I don't care what you may see,
We're gonna burn for eternity.

The line's been crossed,
No turning back,
Just one damn push;
Oh shit I've snapped.

The devil's song of dark decay,
The power to kill...
[Hmm] I think I may!
The time is near,
Consumed by fear:

I see in your eyes,
The word "Demise".

No surprise,
You're full of lies,
A new plan devised,
Your sick-sad cries.

It's sweet to taste,
How much fear is laced,
On your ruby lips,
Where my blood still drips.

Fuck you fuck me.
Fuck. This. Reality.

© Bradleigh D.J Law 2008

This post has been edited by Lord Synical: 28 May 2008 - 05:15 PM

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Posted 29 May 2008 - 03:38 AM

Interesting. From the way it flows it definitely sounds like a Rap, and all things considered it ain't bad. Of course, the content is negligible. But hey, some people like music with this kind of sound, I guess.

You've got talent, at least.
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Posted 29 May 2008 - 11:14 PM

Yeah, certainly unique. A little basic, but interesting. It would be cool to see more, hell I could always start posting my lyrics again also, if it leads to discussion and activity and whatnot.


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